Thursday, May 5, 2016

Poetry

We have started off this term learning to add precise description and language features to poetry. Ruby deserves to be very proud of her writing - it really makes you think!

13 comments:

  1. Love your poetry Ruby looking good.

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  2. Wow Ruby!! I think if you have had this put on this blog you are a superstar! :)

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  3. Cool thats awesome and keep on doing that great writting

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  4. thats awesome ruby keep on doing this I love it

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  5. thats awesome ruby keep on doing this I love it

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  6. Hi my name is Bruno from Owairaka School,
    I like your poems,they are very creative.
    Where did you get ideas from?

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    1. Hi my name is Georgia, and I am from kaniere school and the place we got these images and ideas are from the images shed.
      to get there go to:

      http://www.literacyshed.com/the-images-shed.html
      if that doesn't work go to www.theliteracyshed.com then find "the images shed".

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  7. Hi I'm Navneet,I'm from Owairaka District School.I really like your presentation keep that up.

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  8. Hi, my name is Hannah from Owairaka District School. I really like your post. Keep up the good work.

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  9. Nice job Ruby.
    I like how you put lots of describing language.
    Good Work!

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  10. Hi, my name is Marshall from Owairaka District School. I really like your post. Keep up the good work.

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  11. Hi Ruby my name is Kirsten I study at Papakura Central School,
    Great job. I love your poems and metaphors. I liked how you said in the firework one popping and bursting with a deafening BANG I absolutely loved, loved, loved your describing words. Keep it up.

    Please check out my blog.
    http://pcskirstenj.blogspot.co.nz/

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