Friday, May 27, 2016

Poetry

Ruma Tahi has had a bit of fun with poetry this week and written poems based around a book called 'If' by Sarah Perry. Jimmy has made a great job of selecting and making images to match his writing. Happy reading!

26 comments:

  1. Hi Jimmy well done on your if poems I like your pictures and your imagination .

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  2. Hi Jimmy.The world would be different.Good work and you have a big imagination

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  3. Wow Jimmy what a funky piece of writing.

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  4. Hi Jimmy I love your poem Love Mum xxx

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  5. Hi Jimmy I Love Your Poem


    Sophie

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  6. Well done Jimmy your poems were great. Do you like writing poems?

    By Haniya ODS.

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  7. I love your poem. You are quite right in your poem if all those things were real in that poem the world would be different. Blog ya later. Jack ODS

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  8. Wow that,s a cool poem the world would look way different what happened if bird were worms

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  9. That is so cool Jimmy I love your imagination. I wish I had a imagination like you.Amber ODS

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  10. Hi I'm Navneet,I'm from Owairaka district school I really like your if poem.The whole world would crazy if the Earth was like that.Navneet ODS

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  11. I like the pictures they are so funny.from Indy

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  12. I like the pictures they are so funny.from Indy

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  13. Nice slide.You have a great imagination. But you could add a little bit more, it will be way more awesome
    come and visit our blog also here's the link https://mahitahirakaiaschool.blogspot.co.nz/

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  14. Nice slide.You have a great imagination. But you could add a little bit more, it will be way more awesome
    come and visit our blog also here's the link https://mahitahirakaiaschool.blogspot.co.nz/

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  15. By the way my name is ace. I'm from Rakaia School.

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  18. Hi I love your imagination Jimmy! I wish I could have a brain like yours. Keep up the good work.
    Amber ODS.

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  19. Hi I love your imagination Jimmy! I wish I could have a brain like yours. Keep up the good work.
    Amber ODS.

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  20. Hi, my name is Kairos. I'm from Owairaka School. I really love your videos, they were interesting. Goodbye!

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  21. Hi jimmy this such a cool way to present your work.

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  22. Hi Jimmy, I'm Fariha from PCS
    I love what you did. Its very creative and funny! My favorite part was when you said "If unicorns existed we would ride on them" I would ride on unicorns too.
    How long did it take?

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  23. Hi my name is Rebecca and I'm from Papakura Central School I love how you have presented your work and that all the Images match and it is super funny to read and look at.
    If you would like to check out my blog my blogspot is http://pcsrebeccac.blogspot.co.nz/

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  24. Hey Jimmy,
    I'm Biqi from Papakura Central School. Great work, I love how you presented your poem. And what what happen if it did happen.

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  25. Hi my name is Matthew from south hornby school I really like the way you made a slide about what would happen to our world if it was this different. there was a mistake in slide 10 its about our planet spinning slower that wont happen but the other smaller planets would spin around us.

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