Monday, May 9, 2016

Poetry by Renee

Renee has used excellent language and descriptive language in her three poems. She has shown she understands just how to use similes to create good effect. Well done!
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  1. AnonymousMay 11, 2016 at 11:32 AM

    Hi my name is Wu from Owairaka District School. I liked the simile's you used on slide two, I also liked the pictures you used.

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  2. AnonymousMay 11, 2016 at 11:33 AM

    Hi my a name is Anthony from Owairaka District school

    This is a very cool slide because of all of the moving

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  3. AnonymousMay 11, 2016 at 11:33 AM

    Hi I'm Jack from Owairaka District School. I like the poem you made up it is very interesting. Blog ya later!

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    1. AnonymousMay 13, 2016 at 10:07 AM

      Hi my name is Renee I am from Kaniere School and thank you for your positive comment on my work!!

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  4. AnonymousMay 11, 2016 at 11:35 AM

    Hi my name is Antonio form Owairaka Dictrict School. I like your slides there are soooo cool. Good job Renee.

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    1. AnonymousMay 13, 2016 at 10:09 AM

      Hi my name is Renee I am from Kaniere School and thank you for your positive comment on my work!!

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  5. AnonymousMay 13, 2016 at 10:08 AM

    Hi my name is Renee I am from Kaniere School and thank you for your positive comment on my work!!

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  6. AnonymousMay 13, 2016 at 10:10 AM

    Hi my name is Renee I am from Kaniere School and thank you for your positive comment on my work!!

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  7. AnonymousMay 17, 2016 at 2:25 PM

    Hi Renee its me Khaya your simile's are really full of great words they are really cool.

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