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Thursday, May 5, 2016
Poetry
We have started off this term learning to add precise description and language features to poetry. Ruby deserves to be very proud of her writing - it really makes you think!
Hi Ruby my name is Kirsten I study at Papakura Central School, Great job. I love your poems and metaphors. I liked how you said in the firework one popping and bursting with a deafening BANG I absolutely loved, loved, loved your describing words. Keep it up.
Please check out my blog. http://pcskirstenj.blogspot.co.nz/
Love your poetry Ruby looking good.
ReplyDeleteWow Ruby!! I think if you have had this put on this blog you are a superstar! :)
ReplyDeleteCool thats awesome and keep on doing that great writting
ReplyDeletethats awesome ruby keep on doing this I love it
ReplyDeletethats awesome ruby keep on doing this I love it
ReplyDeletei love it nice
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Bruno from Owairaka School,
ReplyDeleteI like your poems,they are very creative.
Where did you get ideas from?
Hi my name is Georgia, and I am from kaniere school and the place we got these images and ideas are from the images shed.
Deleteto get there go to:
http://www.literacyshed.com/the-images-shed.html
if that doesn't work go to www.theliteracyshed.com then find "the images shed".
Hi I'm Navneet,I'm from Owairaka District School.I really like your presentation keep that up.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Hannah from Owairaka District School. I really like your post. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteNice job Ruby.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put lots of describing language.
Good Work!
Hi, my name is Marshall from Owairaka District School. I really like your post. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Ruby my name is Kirsten I study at Papakura Central School,
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I love your poems and metaphors. I liked how you said in the firework one popping and bursting with a deafening BANG I absolutely loved, loved, loved your describing words. Keep it up.
Please check out my blog.
http://pcskirstenj.blogspot.co.nz/