Friday, March 10, 2017

Poetry by Georgia and Riley

We have really talented poets in Ruma Tahi and I know you will be really impressed with what the language Georgia and Riley have used.

6 comments:

  1. Very descriptive Georgia and Riley, really lovely to read!

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  2. Hi, my name is Mana. I'm at Park Estate School, in room 11, I like your slide it is cool but can you add more detail.

    Kind Regard Mana

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  3. That was a very nice poem Riley and Georgia they look really creative

    Kind Regards Matrix

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  4. Hi Georgia and Riley!

    These were really nice poems! They are really creative it must take a long time to.

    Kind regards

    Riley :D

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  5. Hi there, my name is Joshua and I am a student in room 7 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you thought of many words to make a poem about a log going to the sea. It was amazing and it also made me think of cool poems(that are now stuck in my head). Have you thought about making poems that rhyme? If you would like to see any my learning, please visit my blog. It is =http://wpsjoshuac.blogspot.co.nz/

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  6. Hi i'm Nethya from Waikowhai primary school. I really enjoy reading the poems. They show you really respect the Anzac. The way you presented the poems were really easy to read.Come and check out my blog at http://wpsnethyaw.blogspot.co.nz/.
    Blog you later

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